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English for Journalism Unit 4: Assessment 2: You must assess 3 peer responses

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Did the speaker attempt to respond to the challenge?
(1) No attempt was made.
(2) The speaker tries to respond to the challenge.
Did the speaker use English to respond to the challenge?
(1) The speaker did not use English.
(2) The speaker used English.
The presenter used the features of AP style.
(1) Needs improvement
(2) Somewhat
(3) Very well
The presenter used present tense and active voice.
(1) Needs improvement
(2) Somewhat
(3) Very well
The presenter stressed the content words in each sentence.
(1) Needs improvement
(2) Somewhat
(3) Very well
The presenter paused in appropriate places during each sentence.
(1) Needs improvement
(2) Somewhat
(3) Very well
If you were a viewer, would you be interested in this story?
(1) no
(2) maybe
(3) yes

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Give Feedback
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Good Job! Keep it up!
However, You sometimes struggled to read some words.
I recommend that you have more confident attitude to read. Because you’re handsome:)
I’m also non native speaker as you.
I’m glad to get this chance that I do your peer review.
Thank you.
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Wow! You are really Good Job!
However, If your camera angle was set more higher position, and you had watched the lens, your work was more better than now.
I tried to constructively feedback. But English is not my mother tongue. so I hope you will consider about my feedback.
I’m glad to get this chance that I do your peer review.
Thank you.
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Unfortunately I couldn’t hear your voice.
So I couldn’t make feedback.
You had to check your video when you recorded.
Don’t give up. Try again!
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You are Good Job! You looks like news caster.
However, you were over a time limit.
Sometimes you struggled to read some words.
I tried to constructively feedback. But English is not my mother tongue. so I hope you will consider about my feedback.
I’m glad to get this chance that I do your peer review.
Thank you.
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Good Job! You had many times practiced to read fluently. isn’t it?
I understood that when I watched your video.
If you relaxed and smiled at the recording time, it more better than now.
I tried to constructively feedback. But English is not my mother tongue.
I hope you will consider about my feedback.
I’m glad to get this chance that I do your peer review.
Thank you.
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Did you use the example article for your assignment’s video?
If so, You should make your own article.
You were misunderstood this assignment.
Keep it up!
I tried to constructively feedback. But English is not my mother tongue.
I hope that my feedback some helps your progress.
I’m glad to get this chance that I do your peer review.
Thank you.
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