This week my theme is how to make good habits; Daily writing. My mentor said, “If you want to be good in writing, you should read more books”. I agree with her opinion because I know my vocabulary is few.
I attended my book club’s meeting a day before yesterday that was held once a month. We talked about our troubles that we cannot read books speedly. Why we couldn’t read the book because we buy a books? It was interesting discussion because we were all bookworms except for one person.
Anyway, I noticed what was my problem. I complain, excuse for myself. I’m busy. I’m tired. It’s troublesome. It was not so bad if my health was really not good. However, in my case, I’m just lazy. I counted my books that I haven’t read yet at the meeting’s night. There are 25 English books that I haven’t read in my shelf. It’s starting my new challenge to read books.
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Title:my new challenge to read books.
This week’s my theme is this. “How to make good habit; Daily writing.” My mentor said, “If you want to be get more good writing skills, you should be read more books”. I agree with her opinion because I know my vocabulary is few.
I attended my book club’s meeting that I held once a month at the day before yesterday. We talked about our troubles that we can not read books more speedy. Why we couldn’t read the book that we bought many books? It was interesting discussion because we were all bookworm except for one person.
Anyway, I noticed what is my problem. It’s complain, excuse for myself. I’m busy. I’m tired. It’s troublesome. That’s not so bad if my health is really not good. However, in my case, just lazy. I counted my book that I don’t read yet at the meeting’s night. It’s starting my new challenge to read books. (831 words)