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Never do the same mistake

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When I was a high school student I climbed Tsurgi-dake in Toyama prefecture with my family. It has an altitude of 2,999m. At that time, Our family stayed at mountain hut. I was really impressed with the beautiful view it was like another world. But on the way down, I made a mistake. I didn’t know that one should go down in a slow pace. The human body has a hard time adjusting if the atmospheric pressure suddenly changes. I still remember the bad feeling.
Recently many of my friends recommend mountain climbing. Tomorrow, I will climb the Daibosatsurei in Yamanashi prefecture with my friends. It has an altitude of 2,057m. It’s one of the famous 100 mountains of Japan. I’m really looking forward to go on this day trip. I’m not going to make the same mistake again.

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Title:Never do same mistake
When I was high school student I climbed the high mountain with my family. The mountain is Turugi-dake in Toyama prefecture. The altitude is 2,999m. At that time, Our family stayed at mountain hut. I was really impressed the beautiful view like another world. But in the down way, I made a mistake. I got altitude sickness. Because I didn’t know that the down way need to slow pace. If the atmospheric pressure suddenly changed, human body was difficult to adjustment. Still now I remember the bad feeling.
Tomorrow I will climb the Daibosatsurei in Yamanashi prefecture with my friends. The altitude is 2,057m. It’s one of the famous Japanese 100 mountains. I’m really looking forword to attend this day trip. Never do same mistake when I was young.


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