I usually commute for almost an hour by train from Saitama to my office in Tokyo. One day on my way home, I fortunately got a seat on the train. Actually, I felt lucky because that was the time when trains are usually crowded. I was glad to have a seat but afterwards, I noticed a bad smell. My neighbor’s breath was awfully rotten. I desperately wanted to stand up, but I was very tired. So I took out my handkerchief from my bag and covered my nose and mouth.
Why didn’t he care about his disgusting breath? I wonder if he realized that he reeked. He looked around 70, was wearing a good suit, and was earnestly reading a book. Suddenly I felt afraid if my breath was also bad. It’s scary. Several years ago I advised to my boss to see a dentist for the same reason. It’s important to regularly see the dentist.
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Title:Fear of bad smell.
I usually commute almost 1 hour by train to my office in Tokyo from Saitama. One day, when I went back home, fortunately, I got a seat on the train. Actually, it’s lucky because the time was always crowded in commute people.
I’m glad to sitting, afterward, I noticed a bad smell that my neighbor’s breath was awfully rotten. I want to stand up, but I was very tired. I took out my handkerchief in my bag, after that I covered my nose and mouth. Why didn’t he care his disgusting breath? I wonder why he didn’t realize the smell. He looks elderly, around 70, wearing a high-toned suit, reading a book earnestly.
Suddenly I feel fear if my breath is also bad smell. It’s scary. I said that I advised to my boss go to a dentist several years ago. It’s important to regularly check on the dentist.