Meeting people with diverse thoughts and personalities is really an interesting and exciting endeavour. We learn from their inspiring life’s experiences and come to reflect our own lives too. Today, meeting people does not only happen in real life setting; but technology connects people and bridges relationships and friends.
Last Monday, I attended a study group meeting at the café with friends. The purpose of such meeting was to review and analyze emails. There were 3 of us including myself discussing the issues and contents about the emails. After reading the emails sent to us by our mentor, we exchange thoughts and opinion about the email.
Hence, we realize that we are not just learning the content and purpose of the emails; but more importantly I personally reflected the importance of developing writing skills. So, there are our realizations. One lady said, “I’ll write to think more sentence structure because I’ll take the exam at after next month.” The other lady said, “I noticed that I need to read more books. I lack of vocabulary. That the reason why I can’t write.” What about me? I really learn and develop my English writing skills. So, I decided to read a lot of English books and practice more of writing activities.
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Title: Next month’s my achievement
It’s really interesting that people’s difference thoughts. I attended my friend’s self study meeting at the sophisticated cafe in the Monday morning. Last week I learned about how to more grow to write Skill in daily life by my mentor’s E-mails. (We joined our mentor’s special community on the website. We paying monthly fee at the community.) The meeting member 3 women me included. We had already read same E-mails, so we shared our thoughts; What part was the most impacted me when I read those? What should I change in this week? It’s like New Years resolution. One lady said, “I’ll write to think more sentence structure because I’ll take the exam at after next month.” The other lady said, “I noticed that I need to read more books. I lack of vocabulary. That the reason why I can’t write.” How about me? They were all Japanese, so they said that the writing and reading in Japanese. But I told them I will read more English books and write more in English in my daily life’s habit. This is the next month’s my achievement. (1035 words)