One of my friends supports investors by creating asset allocation apps. He emails his supporters investment advice every day. He wrote, (4)”In order to understand how to avoid big losses, we first need to understand how to decide the rule of cutting our losses. There are many stocks and investment trusts banks. They want to sell some commodities because they will earn interests by doing so. Don’t forget, (2) caveat emptor. If you (1)throw caution to the wind, so try to think again and don’t rush. People have a bias in their self-confidence which makes them (3)take chances. It’s a common and dangerous cognitive bias. Investment requires a strong mental attitude.
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Title: Investment requires a strong mentality.
One of my friends supporting investors in create asset allocation apps. He is sending email to his supporters about knowledge of investment every day. He wrote, (4)In order to understand how to avoid big loss, we need first understand to decide the rule of cut-loss. There are many stocks and investment trusts banks. They want to sell some commodities for they’ll earn benefit. Don’t forget (2) caveat emptor. If you (1)throw caution to the wind, try to think again and don’t rush. Human has a bias of self-confidence which you’ll (3)take a chance. It’s a common and dangerous cognitive bias. Investment requires a strong mentality.
homework:
(1) throw caution to the wind: If you throw caution to the wind, you start taking risks and stop worrying about the danger involved.
(e.g.) “I decided to throw caution to the wind and invest in my best friend’s new company.”
(2) caveat emptor: This Latin expression, which means ‘let the buyer beware’, is a warning to customers that goods are for sale ‘as is’. The buyer is purchasing the articles at his/her own risk and is responsible for examining them beforehand.
(e.g.)”Caveat emptor is a principle to be remembered when buying second-hand goods.”
(3) take a chance: If you take a chance on something, you take action in the hope of success even though you know that the result may be negative.
(e.g.)”I may not be able to get through the traffic, but I’ll take a chance on it.”
(4) In order to (useful words to combine sentences
Usage: “In order to” can be used to introduce an explanation for the purpose of an argument.
Example: “In order to understand X, we need first to understand Y.”
notice
In this article, I try to appropriate use 3 idiomatic phrases(No.1~3) in this article which I write my daily life and thoughts because I’m learning English. This is one of writing training.