I prefer this refined criticism.

I watched a commercial video on YouTube made by Nike. Unexpectedly it was impressive. The video is about 1.5 minute only. In my opinion, this video’s creativity is related with Japanese people’s character and the education system of Japan.

“The middle level is the best.”
“Everyone do the same thing.”
“Never change the system already created.”
“Don’t think about challenging new things.”
“Don’t make mistake.”
“Difference is shameful.”

These thoughts are Japanese culture based. Japanese public elementary school teachers, my parents, and my grandparents taught me when I was child.
I noticed that I’m kind of socially brain washed. But it is still continuing in our society here in Japan. This video is correctly pointing out to this phenomenon. I prefer this refined criticism.

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Title:I prefer this refined criticism.
I watched commercial video on YouTube it made by Nike. Unexpectedly it was impressive. The video’s time is short about 1.5 min. In my opinion, this video’s creativity is related with Japanese people’s character and an education system of Japan.

“The middle level is the best.”
“Everyone do it same thing.”
“Never change the system already created.”
“Don’t think about challenging new things.”
“Don’t make mistake.”
“Difference is shameful.”

These thoughts are Japanese culture base.Japanese public elementary school teacher, my parents, and my grandparents were taught me when I was child.

I noticed that was a kind of the social brain wash because I matured. But it has still continuing our society in Japan. This video is correctly pointing this phenomenon. I prefer this refined criticism.(786 words)

#MINOHODOSHIRAZU(Don’t know your place)