I found a website which teaches how to manage several risks to Japanese who live in a foreign country. We can learn some possibility of what, when and where danger will occur. When I’ve read some articles on the site, I thought that Japan is like a bio-clean room. Too much hygiene condition will kill good bacteria which is a necessity for our body. Japan is now one of the safest countries in the world. Ironically that is the reason why most Japanese weakened the immune system about crime.
After WWII, the economy was incredibly improved, most citizens were (2)on cloud nine from 1955 to 1973: the high economic growth period. At that time, they could not find (3)a cloud on the horizon. Nowadays, Japan suffers the side effects of losing aggressive motivation of youth, declining of the population, and birth rate, as well as the increase elderly.
However, most people don’t recognize it is as a close shave. It’s on
the way of extinction. In my opinion, It’s not only a problem in Japan but many developed countries have a similar problem. We might difficult to stay on cloud nine on eternal.
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I found a website which teaches managing several risks to Japanese who live in a foreign country. We can learn some possibility what kind of dangerous, when and where. When I’ve read some articles on the site, I thought that Japan is like a bio-clean room. Too much hygiene condition will kill good bacteria which is a necessity for our body. Japan is now one of the safest countries in the world. Ironically, that is the reason, almost Japanese weakened the immune system about crime.
After WWII, the economy was incredibly improved, most citizens were (2)on cloud nine from 1955 to 1973: the high economic growth period. At that time, they could not find (3)a cloud on the horizon.
Nowadays, Japan suffers the side effects were losing aggressive motivation of youth, declining of the population, and birth rate, (4)as well as increase elderly. However, most people don’t recognize it is (1)a close shave. It’s on the way of extinction. In my opinion, It’s not only the problem of Japan. Many developed countries have a similar problem. We might difficult to stay on cloud nine on eternal.
homework:
(1) close shave: This term describes a situation where an accident or a disaster nearly happened.
(e.g.) “I almost hit the child who ran out in front of my car. It was a close shave.”
(2) on cloud nine: A person who is on cloud nine is very happy because something wonderful has happened.
(e.g.) “When the boss announced my promotion, I was on cloud nine.”
(3) cloud on the horizon: A problem or difficulty that is predictable, or seems likely to arise in the future, is called a cloud on the horizon.
(e.g.) “They are happily married and for the moment there appear to be no clouds on the horizon.”
(4) As well as
Usage: Use “as well as” instead of “also” or “and”.
Example: “Scholar A argued that this was due to X, as well as Y.”
notice
In this article, I try to appropriate use 4 idioms or words(No.1~4) in this article which I write my daily life and thoughts because I’m learning English. This is one of the writing training.