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I like to ride my bicycle but sometimes I fall off and injury. Last Friday night I came back home by bike as usual. The pavement was not so narrow but a little bit dark, many cars had run across fastly on the road. In my situation was not same which a car mows down a pedestrian. My left handle was touching a bit telegraph pole. I was moaning about pain at that moment when I fell off. It was surprising I didn’t understand what happened at that moment. “Are you OK?” A man who rode a bike stopping and kindly asked me. “I’m fine, Thank you” I murmured shamefully while I was raising up my bike. “I guess you should stay and rest here and more. You are bleeding… ” he said. “It’s fine. Thanks. My house near here” I had to endure with embarrassing and pain. Why did I fell off my bike near my house? I’m curious about that because it happened really near my house. At that time I irritated the hot weather and own bad condition. I might be lack the concentration to ride my bike. This incident draws a moral which I need to more calmer. If I ride my bike I ought to be concentrated.
words to practice: murmur, mow, moan